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Oct 4, 2009 8:22 pm sbauer90 sbauer90 "The weakness of this essay is that Wu uses a little bit too much of pathos and not enough logos. She uses a lot of examples to try and get the audience into her story and then doesn’t give enough examples of why she is telling us about them. The strengths of this essay are that the examples make the readers interested in the logic of the story and the mixture of the two makes the ethos stand out. The mixture of all three of these gives Wu credibility. "
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